Laughter on the 23rd
Floor: The funniest tragedy you’ll ever choke on with laughter
This play provides a
sparkling dilemma. Comedy has a very clear structure. The world of the play
begins out of joint: the jealous husband suspects the faithful wife, the stubborn
father has come under the influence of a charlatan trickster. Something is
wrong with the way things are. This leads to chicanery which leads to
everything coming out right in the end. That’s a comedy.
That’s were Laughter
on the 23rd Floor challenges us. It’s by Neil Simon. It’s based
on his stint as a writer on Sid Caesar’s Your Show of Shows and Caesar’s
Hour in the 1950s. The word “laughter” is in the title. And it is not a
comedy.
I mention this at the
top because about five minutes into the play, a small, unhappy voice behind us
whispered, “Mommy, I’m bored.” Ten minutes later, a mother and two children
under 12 left.
There are many, many
fine, raucously funny moments in the play which are realized to full effect by
the strong cast of this complex offering. The play, however, is a classical
tragedy. A heroic figure with a tragic flaw makes a mistake of hubris and is
humbled, evoking our pity and terror. That is the structure of this play. It
just happens to be about comedy.
And, like all good
classical art, it offers us instruction and delight. In fact, the delight is
the instruction. We laugh until our dorsals beg for kindness or at least
liniment. Joseph Perignat, as Max Prince, the character loosely based on Sid
Caesar, gives us a saw-voiced, larger-than-life, nobly bewildered god of a man
who turns every scrap of pain and confusion he feels into chokingly funny
stuff. His pain is our delight. That is the lesson.
Mr. Perignat and Mark
Swift, as Lucas Brickman, the first-person voice of the play, give new meaning
to the word “awkward” as they face each other, established star and neophyte
writer, alone for the first time together in the writers’ room. Their
embarrassed chuckling equals the audience’s paroxysms of mirth so intense as to
be chiropractic at times .
Brett Molotsky as Brian
Doyle and John Pinto as Ira Stone burn up the stage individually. Mr.
Molotsky’s revelation of the exact nature and location of the script he’s just
sold to Hollywood leaves us gasping. And Mr. Pinto’s entrances with a growing
series of dire illnesses from which he suffers puts us on the floor.
But together they create
a bonfire of the insanities. When the scene is between the two of them, they
are at each other like roosters in rut, which leaves us guffawed breathless and
amazed. The two actors are showing us animus in character as real as any
tragedy could ever hope for, and we’re laughing so loudly we almost can’t hear
them. The whole play is built of sweetly ironic moments like that.
Each character has a
distinct style, and each character has a deep pain covered by using that style
to evoke the laughter of others before the pain becomes too real. Carol Wyman,
given to us with fabulous physicality by Alana Caraccio, is a ground-breaking
feminist before the concept was born. Her demon is the need to prove herself by
standing as an equal in a room full of raunchy men.
Ms. Caraccioith plays
with wonderfully physical comic invention. You don’t want to miss her painful,
pregnant waddle or her attempt to help prevent Max Prince from strangling Ira Stone.
That stage picture in itself is worth the price of admission.
In fact, that moment
gives us the entire metaphor of the play in a single picture. Stone is sprawled
across the ottoman squawking. But he’s not really in distress. Prince is on top
of him with hands around Stone’s neck. But he’s not really throttling. The rest
of the writers have arrayed themselves around in a perfect stage dispersal,
taking positions of intervention. But they’re not really intervening. There’s
nothing dangerous going on.
These are people who are
constantly playing to an imaginary audience. When something occurs, they don’t
respond directly to it as much as quickly figure what the comic potential of
the moment is and what their character ought to be doing in it and where. Then
they take their places in the constant skit of their lives.
Prince isn’t choking
Stone. He’s presenting a comic representation of the rage he feels for the
audience all the characters on stage imagine is watching them constantly. The
writers are completing the stage picture for that audience. And we, the actual
audience, are the irony. We are watching them. There’s a shimmering,
precious quality to moments like those. And this production has an elegant
sufficiency of them.
It is not a perfect
production. It runs 25 minutes too long. The first act drags until Stone
enters.
And I need to tell Mr.
Swift a thing which I hope he takes in the spirit of kindness with which it is
offered. Your intentions are clear. Your physicality is fine. Your comic timing
is there. But I only understood every second or third word you spoke. Your
diction is awful. If you did not have the talent to be on that stage, I would
not trouble to point this out. Practice your speech and you will tear up the
stage with this role.
The play presents the
story of a family which has made function of dysfunction. Carping, jibing,
wrestling, fighting, and loving like any dysfunctional family, they turn their
pain into award-winning, top-rated comic entertainment.
And as we leave the
theatre, we realize that we’ve just had rollicking, if muscularly difficult,
fun at the expense of a man of genius who destroys himself on the horns of his
own talent and the roomful of injured misfits powerless to help him to
salvation. That is the point of the play. It is an exploration of the
relationship between comedy and pain. It is an instruction devoutly to be
wished. See it at the Kelsey. Don’t bring your children.
Laughter on the 23rd
Floor
By Neil Simon
Directed by John M.
Maurer
Onstage Productions
At the Kelsey Theatre
1200
Old Trenton Rd
West
Windsor, NJ 08550
609-570-3333
Through February 5, 2012
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